What are you thinking when you write a blog post, an essay, a short story, or a book? Maybe along the way, it’s writing that one sentence, the perfect one-liner “hook” to make readers want to read more. If you succeeded, readers might pause, reflect and enjoy that kind of genius, but would they want to hear more of the story? I think those readers have stopped to admire the “trees” that stand out among the forest! But, would they keep going with you to the end. Maybe, out of reciprocity friendship, they’d click like and make a “how nice” comment. However, what you need to aim for is a step above, that they “want to hear more of your story.” Then you’ve got them into the forest with you and onto a great adventure. Sure, they liked the trees, but they wanted more! Bravo!
Just for a little fun and whimsy, let’s rev up the “visual” forest adventure and go beyond the green or autumn trees clumped together, and think Enchanted Forest with gold, pink, purple, blue and green swirling hues. Now, in my “book” that’s max abstract imagination almost a sure thing to get readers reading to The End of any post, essay, story or book!
good advice Christine.
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Jodi, thanks for your comment! It’s good for business people as well as for writers!
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What a fun post, Christine! If they want to read more, it’s a great sign 🙂 I like those images too!
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Thanks, Christy! Apparently, that’s the key to success with publishers too, not just readers. Don’t need to be witty or long winded, just to the point, Publishers are too busy and won’t wade through fluff words! Christine
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Great analogy, and so true !
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Thanks so much Sammy D! The fun, whimsy Enchanted Forest analogy might stay in my head when I write.
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Love the forests. I’d walk through any of them, admiring those trees.
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Thank you Diana for your comment! The forest will stay with me too. I’m a visual person! Christine
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Very good advice and I love the images,
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Thank you Masgautsen for your comment, and of course for liking the Emerald Forest! Christine
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You’re so right about that first line, Christine, but that first page that draws you in…that’s the magic. Great advice. The forest images are so lovely. ☺ Van
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Van, you’re right about the first page, even the first chapter. There needs to be a few heart-stopping trees that stand out! Then the breath-taking adventure walk into the Enchanted Forest! Thanks so much for your comment! Christine
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This is a much needed advice – “Think Forest, Not Trees” – Every subsequent words make absolute sense.
Thank you.
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Thanks so much for your comment! I agree, it’s easy to remember and does make sense! Christine
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I don’t know why I always thirst for colors… but this post was a welcome refreshment on this cold snowy day. Thank you Christine. Nicely done. Hugs!
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Thanks so much, Teagan! Seems words and color go best together for me. When I start to write something I think, now what photos/color will go with that. Know you are “snowed” in so to speak and dealing with winter’s rage on the east coast. Stay warm and cozy! Christine
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What a great analogy! Makes perfect sense 🙂
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Thank you, Nicholas! Sometimes a simple “visual” says it best! You can tell I lean toward left brain thinking sometimes. Christine
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Wonderful! 🙂
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Thank you Carol for your visit and comment on the post. It was fun creating it. Christine
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This is exactly what I aim for,to stop and provoke,to evoke all my writing and art work is done with that in mind,great post
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Thanks Sheldon for your nice comment. From what I’ve see and read on you site, you are doing just that! Christine
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We love forests. Our previous home was surrounded by pine trees. In summer, we stared them from our terrace and made nice walks. In that forest, there were mushrooms and blueberries. It was a great joy to pick up them.
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Thanks so much for your visit and comment. I share the love of pine trees too! As a child I lived in the Pine Tree State of Maine. My grandmother’s resort, Sunset Inn was on Kezar Lake and the cottages were surrounded by pine trees. Such a tranquil setting. Love that memory! 💛 Elizabeth
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